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唐韵九期绝句班第六讲松组作业帖 | 
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二,1,尚可!2,婪,失替!3,注意平仄! 
 
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找打,拍回重写 
 
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二,1,散,山,韵同尽量避免!2,清,可斟酌!3,并不流水!注意造词! 
 
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二,1,尚可!2,尚可!3,这,不流水啊!要多加练习用词,避免过于白话。 
 
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清香对好梦,可斟酌!重,可斟酌!诗文是要寄给谁呢?不如寄诗来,给开画卷的自己如何? 
 
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二、1,芳,失替,23,记得检查作业!2,追,可斟酌,3,尚可! 
 
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